Sunday 2 February 2014

Revised Thriller Plot

During the beginning of editing, our group discovered that there wasn't enough time spent on the murder scene. Therefore to lengthen it, we were inspired by the murder from 'Heavenly Creatures' in which allowed more of a plot and a wider variety of angles to be used. Therefore we spent another day re-shooting and this is our current plot:


  1. Our murderer will place a watch as an allurement on the ground then hide
  2. The victim will then come and begin to pick it up
  3. The murderer will sneak behind him and kill him
  4. The murderer will then put the watch back on
  5. The witness (homeless man) will turn around

1 comment:

  1. Yes - a good idea to focus on the cliff hanger so audience pick up the purpose of the attack.

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